I look at you with joy, next to the old rose that shines in the sun's waves, you are the princess of love affair that brings a calm dream. I try to change my mind, to replace the pain with the emotion of joy and laughter - you are the biggest reason for the change.
We make decisions in the romantic mirrors of the same questions, the cause is the deep water of thought in your beautiful eyes. Be gentle in my suffering that brings hungry visions of the new future - we are the beings of light on an unknown path of happiness.
Digital knowledge creates new neuro patterns of love codes, the desire fell through the memory of the magic garden. We circle the paths of romantic consciousness because we know that the truth is far hidden from the lever of passion - hug me.
We are telling lies about the momentous happiness that burns in ignorance, on your hands, I see the beautiful code for the realization of our dreams. Life is an illusion of dreams, we pass by the time that teaches us until the new beginning of our growth.
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Touching words. It’s so pleasing reading through this poetry.
I’ll hold these words specifically, ‘Life is an illusion of dreams, we pass by the time that teaches us until the new beginning of our growth.’
Love is everything
Love is like an insatiable hunger that can never be satisfied.
I like the last line....hug me...
I need that hug right now.
Lol
Your poem just have a way of awakening my desire to love.
Beautiful piece Sir
Big huge
This is so beautiful.
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I tried all means of becoming a great poet like @dobartim
But I always end up combining words for a rap
So great difference which exists between a born poet and one who learns
Still I keep pushing forward hoping to breakthrough someday.
Only knowledge bring great victory
So poetic. We are actually light toghe unknown path. #steemitschool, let's keep winning together because this is our focus.
We win together
painting very pretty my friend..
what glue it paintings you create their own @dorbatim
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thank you @dorbatim,,
I will try it
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Thank you very much
Love has the greatest capacity to cause change!
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This line strike me. Love this. I have a lot to say on this.
It is time for change
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Thank you mr @dobartin. Im join discord a @steemitschool now
Welcome
I look at you with joy, next to the old rose that shines in the sun's waves, you are the princess of love affair that brings a calm dream.
A thousand words encrypted in it! Nice work @dobartim
Thank you very much
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So beautiful poetry...to day you chose excellent topic on the palms of Happiness. Great post dear @dobartim. Thanks for sharing this beautiful post
Thank you very much
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Yeah sometimes, mirror will be your bestfriend. It feels good to be speaking with yourself sometimes.
This is very important for success
he looks at her with joy in the night
he held her close with love and delight..,
she stares at him like its all just a dream..,
I love him, i love him, I love him.
She screams
your poetry brought back a loving memory so i kind of gave a different interpretation to it. Thank you for sharing
FELICITACIONES! EL AMOR DA LA FELICIDAD.
You are too old to be called loverboy, so I guess its loverman, beautiful piece sir
I am a poetry lover and I admire this work of yours @dobartim
So beautiful and deeply touching. A lovely read.
Very very beautiful. :)
I Always like your poetry.
Keep up inspiring people, @dobartim
Beautiful words. :)
There's no better inclination is there?
Genuine Happiness.
It influences you to feel enthused, invigorated, alive!
On the off chance that no one but it could keep going forever. An unending condition of happiness. Of absolute bliss.
Approve, so rude awakening required. Perhaps always joy isn't conceivable. There surely is by all accounts excessively numerous things to thump your satisfaction onto the floor in the present hyper-occupied, hyper-aggressive world…
Terrible new
Real work bro..
Hello @dobartim. I read your piece with a great degree of interest. Your work seems so positive and uplifting. The complete antithesis of mine. I am curious as to where you get your inspiration and if you have any advise on how I can tap into that energy.