Gentle Energy

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)
  • Tenderness fell with the first snow, with a smile you showed the path of our interest. The lighthouse is sleeping with the thoughts of night love, you are the wonderful imagination of the fairy-tale young man. You threw the past on the shoulders of powerful thoughts, I miss the wisdom of a mystical word.

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  • The power of the mind manipulates the thoughts of energy, it is impossible to steal water from the infinite ocean. Songs are rolling on the hills of knowledge. Art is a rare message of deep meaning that we do not understand in the digital age of scientific wonders.

  • We build houses from the seed of need, celebrate the days that pass with the first birds. You were born in my heart before my birth, you are a powerful message concealed in a bottle of magnificent secrets. Without you, the day has no power to become good, you have created powerful people.

  • We draw attention to the interest of passion, beauty is the transient size that sleeps in the mind. We constantly listen to the masters' speeches, the change of rhythm brings freedom to your movements with the emotion of silence. I feel your touch in the veins of idealism, perfect mistakes make us perfect creatures.


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Truly... houses are built on the seed on need. This need in my opinion is shelter. It is as essential as life itself.

You were born in my heart before my birth

The conception had already occurred before you commenced the bustles of the world.
Great poetry. Good to start up the day.

This is Karma my friend

it is impossible to steal water from the infinite ocean
This is a wise saying my friend , it’s very impossible to steal water from the ocean.

        Our knowledge is like the ocean
  Cant steal from it cause it’s non ending 
        We learn to grow in wisdom daily
  And we enlarge our coast of understanding

See you on the top my friend

Nice poetry!

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"You were born in my heart before my birth" How a sentence it is! I wonder what is your inspiration to create such poetries...

nice posting^^

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This poetry consists of various intelligent lines. My eye seem to catch a lot of captivating sentences, but the phrase "perfect mistakes makes us perfect creatures" really hit me. Another intelligent post from a creative personnel! @dobartim.... we win together😀

We win only together

The heart drives in to great connections I love this post it's a very nice one sir love to see more of your post

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If you turn the first picture 90 dgr anti-clockwise, then I see a black ghost.

Spirit from the universe

Good morning @dobartim
The poem is master piece, the emotions and wisdom you put in can come only through experience.
I thank you for the effort you do and the mission you support. We all follow you now and forever.
Thanks a lot for sharing this poetry.

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You are welcome, we win together

I love this.
Great poetry.

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