Between Us

in #poetry8 years ago
  • The new story flies in the park idea, the snow warmed up a stone heart on the bridge of our memories. We go ahead through the labyrinth of energy, we choose number 43 at the hotel of passion. The desert became an oasis of the sight of love.

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  • The mountains play in the minds of the stars. The mountains play in the minds of the stars, the flint lamps descend to your emotions through the chemistry of our bodies. A dopamine-related phenomenon brings flagrant exclamations, cover me with gentle kisses.

  • The smell of morning rose on the terrace of a romantic look, we jump into children's dreams through the memories of fairy tales. We walk on the land of dragons in a beautiful suit, we fly through new dimensions of beauty and knowledge -
    Feel my energy of the heart and hug me.

  • It is time for new changes, the sources of love change the flows in universal rules. You are the buzz of my program, you are the ideal of my love for the pedestal of perfection. I always remember beautiful moments and I never forget your gentleness and detailed love.

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Original poetry written by @dobartim
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"...the sources of love change the flows in universal rules"

I like the sound of this. I feel the spark in the words, I am touched as every other person is.

Love changes everything.

Love changed history.

Love changed hard hearts into soft.

Love ignites possibilities.

Love creates limitess virtues.

Love changes universal rules.

Aaargh, I like this.

Love is main power of cosmos, make one poetry and be part of Steem Schools

Hey @dobartim, tell me more about the Steem Schools.

What is it about? How do I join the community and what are the benefits?

I willlike to explore..

You poetry flows like a water on a gentle stream, adapting to all the changes that's coming you way. Words are like fish that follows it into the sea of knowledge and humblness.

Love is greater then poetry, but poetry can make love greater. See the eyes of a stranger as your neighbors, feel the warmth of the heart from across the galaxies, let's fly away into freedom and share it to all other lovely souls.

Much love, Luka.

Awesome words my friend, see you on the top

We win together my neighbor! :D

Pretty cool poetry @dovartim
Loved it. Golden words are displayed specially that line in the end that new changes are needed to get new things . Gif is really good
Keep up your good work

Thank you very much

Loved it !! Love is eternal adoration for your work

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The poetry speaks for itself,talking about every occassion with every bit of love and happiness.
The mention of mountains and snow talks about great memories and views.
Awesome poetry and good use of words as always .
Have a nice day ahead

Thank you for wonderful comment, have a nice and successful day

Sehr sehr schön🙂Predivno i ljepo a ljubav e nai silna Energie to vec e dokasano i s kvantova fisika

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... we jump into children's dreams through the memories of fairy tales..

Oh, how we long for childhood again.

Love and spirit make our future

Love is a beautiful thing.....this post got me so emotional...i love it

Thank you very much, have a nice day

Wow, you are really talented. I can't fully explain how I felt while reading this, but it is heartwarming for sure. I would express myself poeticly like some other comments below, but I am so not good at it. Anyway you get a follow from me, keep up the good work!
Also, I joined Steem Schools recently and I recommend everyone to join as well because it is a great community. Have a wonderful day!

Have a nice and successful day

kata-kata yang bagus dan bijak, anda pantas jadi seorang penyair 💺, terima kasih @ dobartim👍👍👍

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words are good and smart, you deserve so a poet 💺, thank you @ dobartim👍👍👍

Love makes our daily life is made of happiness.
Excellent images very magical.
Greetings always positive mind.

Great work loved it!👍