We walk in the space with stone signs, the spring touches the imagination of my dreams while I look into your magical eyes. Life is a fire that spreads into the field of ethereal consciousness of free minds - The smile raised a new level of common kiss.
Source - pinterest.co.uk/pin/316166836315228392/Sharm smelled of you this sunny morning, you showed me the depth of the word in the cosmic heart. The river of knowledge touches the surface of human capacity, we have progressed far in the world of illusion - Love triggered sincere tones in the ocean of beauty.
We believe in ideals as we look at the stone bridges of the digital oasis, we run the walls of the past in a better direction of natural strength. The idea has become a safe zone where money replaces God, you are the ultimate goal of enjoying the perfect imagination.
I found my peace, emotion and clean character in your sincere intentions, your habits raise my falls to the level of the winner. You are the source of infinite beauty from which I drink love - My happiness comes in your hands of blessing as a sign from heaven.
Source - pinterest.co.uk/pin/304767099753182521/
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
Wauhhh....
you really speak to my soul,
reflect the beauty of your writing.
My eyes find pleasure in the pool,
Once washed by the generosity of your Saul.
I do check your posts,
Make it my song,
Make it my life,
And move with no cost.
If I had the power, I would make you on top,
Cause your heart, always support the poor,
Tell me your friend and I'll tell who you are,
Just live that life, and angels will reward you,
If only, you live in regards to thier masters will.
If only I had I could,
The power of illusion makes me cold.
Pushes me to live that virtual reality
Which was then written by a certain Goran.
@jona12/steemit-Uganda
Amazing poetry dear I like it and enjoying your poetry tooo
Make one , I must to see your poetry
@dobartim I try to make poetry because iam not poet I just like poetry. Hahaha
But I will have to make poetry for you. Wait for minutes
https://steemit.com/new/@nomannomi/my-1rst-and-own-poetry-i-make-it-own
You gave me the life when I want to die.
You give me the flower when people give me tear .
You give me your own when I have nothing .
You give me the love when peoples give me hate.
You give me the relation when iwas alone.
Now I dont want live with out you.
Now I dont want flower I only want you.
Now I don't want life I only want you .
Now I dont want peoples I only want you.
My own poetry @nomannomi
woow ... a very beautiful picture
@dobartim
well said my friend @dobartim , I like your words, they really touched me...
Thank you for this kind words
woww really a good story my friend .. i want tanyak how how many can upvote like you, i've tried my best .. but i masuh not upvote.saya've made a good post but no one support me
Change your mmind
Very good poetry, very soulful and heavy, it really touches me.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you very much for nice words
Youre welome, you desrve it.
poems are very evocative soul @ dobartim ,, I am very interested when reading your post.
Exellent
the illusion is indeed amazing, sometimes something that starts from the illusion made to be real.
Of course
que bellas palabras, de verdad mis ojos se me llenaron de lagrimas
Really so poignant and I loved this bit:
I love the image of Life spreading out like a fire...wonderful.
Thank you very much
A very beautiful post. Your connection with the divine is very strong. Elevating as you ... Namaste:)
Wow
good
Beautiful lines. This gives me a boost of inspiration to continue my daily poetry writing challenge.
Keep going
Very good poetry ..like it so much
Thanks
"We believe in ideals as we look at the stone bridges of the digital oasis, we run the walls of the past in a better direction of natural strength. The idea has become a safe zone where money replaces God, you are the ultimate goal of enjoying the perfect imagination."
Wow this is awesomely deep yo.
I love it! Digital Oasis, it's everywhere.
Technological advancement, good or bad then?
Depend from us
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@dobartim! Let me take it from the last paragraph
.... I found my peace, emotion and clean character in your sincere intentions, your habits raise my falls to the level of the winner. You are the source of infinite beauty from which I drink love - My happiness comes in your hands of blessing as a sign from heaven....
You just described the wonderful attributes of God there. In God we found true Peace. He is exceedingly beautiful in all things of life. Just as you rightly mentioned God's beauty could be found in his unfeigned Love for mankind. In him alone you find geniue intentions not being mixed with pretence. He is sincere and meant well for everyone. The God that can accommodate any person, it doesn't matter how sinful or dirty you had been, once you come with a sincere heart He says you are welcome my child now sit down at my right hand. What a God! His path is indeed beautiful, Peace and lovely.. Thank You @dobartim for this post and stating the true qualities of God at the last paragraph which has made me reflect deeply on the personality of God. God bless you.
i read this line over and over again. its kind of a gem hidden in the poem because the poem is talking about love and ethereal things, and then this line stood out to me because i realize the implications of it. alluding to the powerful outreach that even our own beloved steemit allows - a stone bridge in a digital oasis. im not sure if thats what you were alluding to but thats where my mind went. the internet is a wealth of information and in many ways a digital land of opportunity.
i also like the play between something so archaic as "stone bridge" and something as abstract as a digital oasis. really nice line and loved your poem!
i like to play with ideas of technology and love as well in many of my poems! :)