The Break-Up

in #poetry7 years ago

Say goodbye
Our paths differ beneath the twilight sky
"I love you" she said
"I'll never forget you"

Words die in my heart before coming out of my mouth
The petals rain down in between us
The melody echoes in the air

I wish you could be dyed and concealed within the twilight
But I can only say goodbye
As you silently fade away

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