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RE: Rain On Your Lips

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Hmm! Awesome poetry that reflects reality.
This is very true in reality:

Feelings fade in the sun of truth,

And also, this line is deep:

We are walking on future memories while reality sleeps in the bed of the past - I miss you.

Thank @dobartim for sharing this... Sincerely, your poems stretch my creativity, as they make me think figuratively with respect to reality.