fantastic poem. I am a writer and I hope to gain recognition like you @ericvancewalton.
check out my poems , I would like some professional pointers from you.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dante31/nigerian-dream-part-1
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dante31/the-mirror
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dante31/t-h-u-r-s-d-a-y
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dante31/coma