July

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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My love for her is unmeasurable

Wish I May hold onto her forever

Her time me was a rent

Dear June, why did you have to go so soon

Maybe I don't understand

Buffering
(trying to comprehend)

Legends are born to live forever

It was like you never left

You came anew like tomorrow

And qualified yourself as an adjective

Your heat barks announces the dog days

Like the legend of the phoenix

My sweet June is reborn hot as July

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"The serene philosophy of the pink rose is steadying.
Its fragrant, delicate petals open fully and are ready to fall, without regret or disillusion, after only a day in the sun.
It is so every summer.
One can almost hear their pink, fragrant murmur as they settle down upon the grass:
'Summer, summer, it will always be summer.'"

Wow! You are truly a poet. This is amazing. I loved this.

I think you should go into poetry.

haha thanks buddy

Wow totally splendid, I love the way you used feminity for the poem, it's quite endearing, a free flowing free verse as this, is always beautiful to the senses and appeals because one pictures the images, I love this so much

Thanks man

Happy New Month

What a lovely poem to begin the new month.
Like the legend of the Phoenix.

😎

It's a beautiful month. Steem is rising

Nice one Boss.
You sparked my imagery.
I want to be like you when I grow up.

Haha you're welcome buddy

Short and satisfying