Hi @daisydelta, thanks so much for this entry. I really enjoyed this piece and how it began with the sky is blue and spiraled through the vortex of the poem all the way back to the sky is blue. Nice photos too.
You followed the guidelines well, but could you also add the Day # into your title somewhere? Also please add one small invitation link to the Steemit school discord channel somewhere at the bottom. :-)
Placing you in the Beginner category for now, but don't be surprised if it moves up :-D
wow, thank you for the tips. ill do it next time and i'll edit this :)