A charlatan made bare

in #poetry5 years ago (edited)

A charlatan made bare

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original poetry and images
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by @d-pend


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Hazes seethe in dream,
distance—
in the instant of awakening
—implanted
along the puppet-seam.

Wires fine—
—they glint—
—I dance, moved by unseen
sleight of hand
of macrobes' script metallic.

Steel-sharp, my limbs flail
in glimmered convolutions.
Art-flint, in a heart's bent,
spark cosmo-rituals.

Planet-wise, I'm riverside,
at humanity's burst dam.

Thumbed codices of water, wretched
with the touch of decades, jostle,
grasp onto my cover's catch:
I turn, thesaurus of wind,
to
slip
past

Fell indexes of profession—
—and hue.
Funnels of finest failure
to utter essences:
pyres built by rue.

Eyes that tangle mine
with the flame of eloquence
divine unspoken—
only to unwind, erase
the knots of letters burned.

Ground down
by crowd's abrasion,
I am made scant by pumice
of all our truths withheld:
behind a magmic rictus—
vicissitude of alms.

O humble mendicant palm:
unfold, outstretch.
make me noble in transparency
and frail in dark designs.

O little one, made minor
by the monolith of earth,
to grasp nay, to be held—
to reach nay, but to search.

A vast reach of arms
cannot falter, yet fail.
By hours growing grey—
by finger-clasp, made pale.


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By Daniel Pendergraft,
written January 22nd and
edited February 9th 2020.
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First published
on STEEM blockchain.

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Images are digital composites
of free domain photographs.


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Optional discussion questions:


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1) What significance do hands have in this piece?
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2) In the context of this piece, what is the meaning of prestidigitation?
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3) Who or what is the charlatan in this poem?

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In the poem, I feel that the hands symbolize empowerment, connection between the times and the life. The source of wisdom was always reserved for a few and kept on jealously guarded writing rolls so that the majority did not have access to true knowledge and people were easy prey to puppeteers who assembled the world's knowledge according to their interests.

But, the hand that gave them power, can also take it away. Ancient wisdom seeks to be decoded, although in all stages of humanity there have been false prophets, wolves disguised as lambs willing to deceive in order to maintain the status quo.

That is why it is so important to know how to search for the truth in the undergrowth. Not everything that is said is true, we must know how to seek balance and never settle for the established because the illusion fades by paying attention and it becomes clear that it is time to get out of the fist of a few and force them to open their palms so that we see that there is nothing.

behind a magmic rictus—
vicissitude of alms.

The illusion maintains a trick balance, according to which few have much and many have little. And, in the end, everything is reduced to the material, to economic power above all else, to the riches that move the interest to have, rather than to grow, flourish and bear fruit to share. Mr. Money is the charlatan, the conjuror who deceives humanity into believing that "you are worth so much, if have so much", by denying the spiritual gifts, our essence that disempowers the false god.

I'd say these are the hands of the gardener and the plants are the puppets. No matter what you do you are not the one that makes them grow. That's the magic. The gardener is the charlatan.

Or you are the charlatan and the poem is a big slide of hands making us all the fools.

Thanks for weighing in @mineopoly! I'm happy that you are still around these parts after my sustained absence on STEEM. I want to get back to pretty regular sharing on here again as I work towards getting my work published more widely this year. It makes me feel connected to practice the craft of writing and get some interaction while in the dojo!

Hope you are well :o)

Your return to Steem is a sure-fire sign that the bull market is BACK!

Hah! We'll see, but I believe in the dream 😉 How've you been man?

Quite the same, though maybe a little more focused and creative as I try to sort life out :)

And... desperate for that elusive bull-run :D

@d-pend , please change your posting keys. Your account is one of the accounts that @steemengineteam is using to upvote their spam posts (which are now being flagged to zero). They were also most likely compromised and the keys are now also available to other accounts which may also abuse your voting power. It would be great to have your vote removed from those posts allowing more flag power to fight other spam. See this post explaining what has happened in your extended absence https://steemit.com/downvotes/@mack-bot/did-you-get-a-downvote-from-me

glad to see you are back to posting again

cc @guiltyparties

Thank you for letting me know @throwbackthurs. I just updated my master key. By the way, I've been wondering how to catch up on all the updates that have happened in the past several months on the STEEM blockchain. Know any good resources for getting back up to speed?

great ! Thank you. I highly recommend following and watching all videos by @taskmaster4450 & @theycallmedan . In addition theres many Steem groups on Discord. Try posting on another front end like Steempeak . In addition, you can also try out Steem Communities. @themarkymark has a great post about communities with a tutorial included https://steemit.com/hive-144703/@themarkymark/what-do-you-think-of-communities-beta-leave-your-feedback

and last but not least get ready for SMT's.

Perhaps you can create a "Poetry" Community and create your own token.

I hope this helps you get re acquainted with all of the new developments.

beautifully done my friend @d-pend

Thanks for saying so @enjoywithtroy! Have a good one.

Hi @d-pend!


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