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RE: DAYDREAMS / A Journal of Fiction #29

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

This part of your day dreaming is catching and I want to catch up with you on this one.

We follow its path down her cheek,
a river that tip-toes on crystals
and lands on the altar.

If I may ask what do you mean by that? Am curious to know. Am following up from the very beginning to end. @beginningtoend. Good work

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The path of her tear (salty tear) like a river of crystals.

That's cool. What about

and lands on the altar.

You are the best