This is so beautiful, I love how you bring it back to the opening line. I could gush about how I love this for another paragraph but I have already left you a mini essay on another post lol I hope to see plenty more of your writing!
I have launched a little poetry/prose contest, and would love to hear your take on utopia if you wanted to enter :)
yeah i already entered the contest. left a link of my entry on the comment section of the post.