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RE: Poem / The Path

in #poetry7 years ago

Ethan, this poem was the best yet because you shared a part of you that speaks of your challenges in life. It was truly beautiful and real. Not everyone can reach down into their soul and pull up pain, hurt and yet hope. You really are amazing for such a young person but somehow your soul is old and deep. To be able to try to find the light at the end of a long tunnel shows that despite all darkness, there is hope and light....you just have to reach for it with determination. You are too important to not keep trying and hoping and being! So here is a salute to you from me for the beautiful poem you shared with us. I am very proud of you!.....Cabbagepatch :D

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Thank you! 😊 My mother has always told me I was an old sould as a young child, instead of playing in the dirt I'd be speaking with the adults