Great work @bhmcintosh.
The story/poem draws upon the reader's imagination and sentiment towards fragile and naive creatures. It is difficult not to think of the similarities these puppies have with the innocents in our world - waiting for a helping hand that might never arrive. The seemingly hopeless sacrifice and insurmountable circumstances push that boundary, and the reader is drawn into the puppies plight. Finally, the sudden last-minute arrival of the savior completes the cycle by uplifting the spirits of the reader.
Great work @bhmcintosh.
The story/poem draws upon the reader's imagination and sentiment towards fragile and naive creatures. It is difficult not to think of the similarities these puppies have with the innocents in our world - waiting for a helping hand that might never arrive. The seemingly hopeless sacrifice and insurmountable circumstances push that boundary, and the reader is drawn into the puppies plight. Finally, the sudden last-minute arrival of the savior completes the cycle by uplifting the spirits of the reader.
Wow, your review offers some great insights! Thanks for taking the time to make such a thoughtful post! I appreciate it!
Thank you for continuing to share your work. Regards, @fcpway
Dogs are wonderful. As are cats. Here is hoping one day, like very human, they are all assured love and care:)
In this world that seems so big to us, big enough to fear...
Wonderful work @bhmcintosh
Thanks for your comment, @preety.
Very well you wrote..I like it..Thanks for give us nice poem...
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for your post.
Great! You always fantastic
Thanks for the kind words, @paru.