In this poem I feel as though it's big brother, always watching, but the language does suggest some kind of omnipresent entity that could be there, above it all, perhaps even using big brother as a tool. Yikes!
"If you knew the full extent of what I see when watching you,
I trust that you'd be happy that I capture everything you do,
For any deed you've ever done, I have seen it and recorded, too,
From your early morning coffee, to your midnight rendezvous..."
Just awesome poem...
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A midnight rendezvous ... only in my dreams, these days. One is left wondering ... it is a omnipresent entity doing the watching or big brother.
In this poem I feel as though it's big brother, always watching, but the language does suggest some kind of omnipresent entity that could be there, above it all, perhaps even using big brother as a tool. Yikes!
In lean toward the belief of a collective consciousnesses that most of us our unconscious of ... that would make us all big brother.
"If you knew the full extent of what I see when watching you,
I trust that you'd be happy that I capture everything you do,
For any deed you've ever done, I have seen it and recorded, too,
From your early morning coffee, to your midnight rendezvous..."
Just awesome poem...
I am glad to know you liked it, @tahmida56. Thank you.
You know I'm watching you, but I don't think you're aware.... Lovely....
Thanks!
Awesome poem!
Thank you, @paru!