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RE: Poem / Untitled

in #poetry7 years ago

Who hasn't been here! That feeling like you can barely keep your feet on the ground...

Which is why I love the way the thought process is measured by the actual footsteps taken in this poem. Things are moving forward toward something... GOOD, the reader can't help but hope. Either way, an answer ;)

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ps: "if you one day see this don't run and hide" is too awesome and sweet :)

I'll probably show it to her this week end... I don't know how it's gonna go

Whoah! Scary. Love is something you have to be so ridiculously brave for.

Everyone who tries is heroic IMO