Enjoyed the read, very minimal style. Hey just a thought, take it or leave it, how about tightening up this one line. It is the best line in the poem IMO.
Like the whips of the icy wind
Like whips of icy wind
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Thanks for the comment and the feedback; I like the change, and I'll definitely keep that type of cleanup in mind for next time as well.