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RE: Occult Culture (Spoken word poem with video)

in #poetry7 years ago

Made it into about 3:32 on video, I enjoyed it to that point, but then, well, I have a language barrier I guess, can only take so much off-colored language. That being said, I think you did a nice job on the imagery and the background sound for the part I did listen to.

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Thanks for the feedback! I'm guessing by off colored language you mean cursing? Yeah.. I try to keep it at a minimum.. But I still tend to use the f word pretty often. I'm working on it, and sometimes I think it's necessary to get the point across, but will consider that in the future and make an attempt to consider those who are extra against curse words.

Glad to hear you enjoyed it outside of that! Cheers.

Happy-slightly belated birthday. Hope you enjoyed it. I tried to be nice in the post, yeah, cursing sometimes gets to me if overdone.