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You make a great point lol. I thought about editing this stuff but I though it would be a good reminder of where I used to be. I think the way its written with bad grammar and punctuation adds to the style. Then again I could be wrong and it just drives people nuts haha!

Haha oh I love it either way. I always go back to my old stuff and edit it to make it more effective. But keep doing you!!!