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Thanks :D I don't remember why I wrote it like that actually. I'd like to say it was on purpose but I wrote it before college it was more likely accidental lol

Lol!! One of the better pieces of poetry I've seen on here so far.

wow thanks! :D I have a lot of stuff from the past I'm thinking of posting but most of it is pretty dark so I'm not sure.

Absolutely post it!! And keep writing!!!