When the heart is pierced, it is not scary looking, not scary piercing eyes. Beautiful verse. I, too, sometimes am fond creation of verses. And you're right that everyone finds meaning in them. For me, your poem is revealed in the sense of accepting the inevitable bitter truth. How Jesus took death for us. Nor should we be afraid to open our hearts and eyes to the pain of others. We should not be indifferent. You need to be able to accept someone else's pain and suffering, as their own. And fight against evil together.
Yes!