The Good and the Bad - Original Poem Steemit Exclusive (Cleansing Poetry) (Enjoy)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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The good and the bad
The sane and the mad

two terms so subjective
from different perspective

It looks alright
Until the fight

Than all did change
Balance got arranged

But in between
What has it been

I call it peace
I call it love

I call it will
I call it skill

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I call it calmness
I call it beleif
But where is madness
There is no greif

So what I say
It's all the same
You have one way
To win this game

To understand
all that comes to you
Is for a reason
Is the choice you do

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By Angel Veselinov

Well here we come with some more cleansing poetry just came out inspired by :P many events . Thank you once again all for the support. Also not to think that I am spamming or anything but I have just regained my Bandwith and can post... :) Was not able for about 6 hours so quite a lot of work got done during. But all work was done on the go as I like to say so you got to be sure it is all authentic and original as usual :) God Bless You All. Thank you for reading my stuff. I am really grateful for all of your support. Love and Peace.



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Here are some of my other poems :

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Awesome poetry men.Thanks for sharing with us.
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Thank You Glad You Liked It. Welcome anytime to come back :)

Love how catchy your poems are. You get straight to the point! I have more of a hard time keeping my sentences short.. any tips for beginners?

Well for sure :) actually that is the article I was writing right now ;) So stay tuned :) Soon to come.
If you go back and read most of my educational poems you will know much how things are here
That is very fast read compared to some long tutorials. I hope you enjoy.
Tell me more about you and I can tell you what you can be successful here with :)

You look like brand new :P I encourage you to come to my Discord Group you will find the link on the bottom of my Post Discord Server Click Here ... Come there I will explain briefly what have you gotten in to :)

Another :P Good tip is read my Discord post it will help you understand what is the missing piece of the puzzle right now :)

Great poetry dear.... How do you make them appear in the middle?

Just add <center> your text </center> :) Hope it helps

I enjoyed this one quite a lot. The rhyme felt effortless (except the third stanza, but I will let that slide). I will leave you a comment on Discord on some other feedback which may not be appropriate as a comment here.

Well it is fine man I accept criticism. That third stanza may be just needs "rearranged" :P and it works. I like your skill to spot up flaws and edit. :p You are for sure our main editor of our future publishing house. Because that is the next step I am going to make until the end of the year :)

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