Your feelings really shine through in your poem. Love how you returned to the stars dancing in your beautiful lady's eyes.
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Your feelings really shine through in your poem. Love how you returned to the stars dancing in your beautiful lady's eyes.
Thank You! I am glad you enjoyed it. I thought of it like a see saw. The title and the last single line are like books ends. Each verse See saws the words with the center is always the same. So the story also see saws by beginning and ending with the stars in her beautiful eyes. 5 lines in every verse and only 5 verses long. Not sure if my explanation makes sense but that was my thought.