I think your poem is very strong for a beginner. I like how you used repetition of the symbols that you put in the poem as well as the sounds of the word you chose. I like how you didn't force your rhyming and you didn't make everything rhyme perfectly. You let the sound of the words create a feeling without trying to force it. Good job.
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Thank you, @acousticsteveo. As beginner, I still learn how to express my feeling/idea in a foreign language (English).
Thank you again 😊