THE STORM

in #poem7 years ago


THE STORM

The morning comes but there is no sun,
A dismal feeling has begun.
The clouds build quickly filling the sky,
The birds start to leave with a loud outcry.

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In the distance thunder rumbles,
As it increases the noise one humbles.
The trees bend down toward the ground,
As the wind makes an eerie sound.

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The first raindrop the roof does hit.
On the window ledge I sit.
The rain pours down the window pane,
And overflows the corner drain.

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The storm does now become more violent,
The power goes and all is silent,
Except the raging of the storm.
The hail now begins to form.
The eerie greenish coloured sky
With the lightning does ally.
Creating a powerful display,
A warning message does relay.
From the window I move away,
As the trees still do sway.

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Time does pass and all goes still.
A bird cries out a happy shrill.
The clouds do part and the sun shines through.
The earth refreshed and all anew.
The air is fresh and very clear.
This sight of nature we revere.

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Poem by Sourcherry
Photographs from Pixabay

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nice pixx

Really beautifull

Thank you.

Storm of upvotes will be great for this one ^^

Thanks. Nice play on words.

Very lovely poem created with passion and soul that bends the unique motivation of every words. keep it up follow you! nice poem.

Thank you.

You are welcome!

Gorgeous. I love the moodiness of this, especially the start. I love the way you took the trpuble to illustrate it with pictures too.

Thank you. I try to find the best pictures to reflect the images in my mind to help the poetry come to life.

Beautiful! Reflecting the state of Mother Earth right now! Thank you!

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Great poem, matches the weather where I'm at.

You are really a great poet love to read your poetry.

Thank you.

I Love Naturally Poem and you provide nature with poem, just great job man.

great job and carry on and make next poem for us.

Thank you. Nature is a good inspiration for poetry.

Yes sir only nature is real. good nature change mind and feel awesome.

Very nice :)

Thank you

Great job great peot. I'll be glad if you could use any of my photos for your post. (Will be posting photos soon on steemit, previously used instagram for photos, @sina.sadeqi13)

you done a perfect job man. i love the ways you describe a things by a poem
and i really appreciate that you are doing a perfect job
thanks you so much ......

Nice and real post keep up the good work thumbs up and a resteem from my side. Cheers.....@sourcherry

Thank you.

I liked the poem! The pictures were beautiful, making the writing stand out even more! Great job!

Thank you.

Thank you for this amazing blog! All of this, a combination of words and pictures in such a perfect way creates some magical feeling) I'm deeply impressed with your blog, thanks!

Thank you for your comment. I tried to express the magic of the storm through words and pictures. I am very happy that you liked it.

I particularly enjoyed the image the most.
Heavey dark clouds are beautiful to look at. Loved it!

wow really beautiful photo thanks for sharing

Your welcome.

Mind-blowing photo,
I just love it. Thanks to you for share with us.

Your welcome. I'm glad you liked it.

Wonderful

Oooh, I love this kind of weather, it looks so cosy. Great poem, you really capture the feel of winter. Well done.

The simplicity of this poem convey the message well. The rhyme scheme portray the message well; the first three stanza carry aabb rhyming scheme. I so much like the colourful image used which depict nature in its glory

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Your poetry leaves room for mental imagery. This is a lovely piece.

Thank you.

I have loved with your poem, what great talent, I never tire of reading it. Poetry is deeper and philosophical than history.

Wonderful expressions of how a storm is and detailed words that paint vivid images of how the rain begins. Great poem.
Love the pictures too.

your post is very good friends, and I really love it, and hopefully your next post is more also high quality. thank you for sharing with us all. success always make you friend.
@sourcherry

your post is very good friends, and I really love it, and hopefully your next post is more also high quality. thank you for sharing with us all. success always make you friend.
@sourcherry

Thank you.

Wow amazing photography

Thank you.

I like your poem😊

Thanks. I'm glad you like it.

HERMOSAS FOTOGRAFIAS,HACEN QUE VIVAS EL POEMA

Gracias. Me alegra que te haya gustado el poema.

Que lindo poema! la naturaleza se impone a través de la tormenta. Muy bellas imágenes .

Gracias. Las tormentas pueden ser muy hermosas.
Me alegra que hayas disfrutado el poema.

Hermoso poema, se complementa muy bien con la fotografías..!!!

Me encantan tus poemas y este tiene ese mensaje de esperanza que siempre debe existir en nuestros corazones ante las dificultades, que después de la tormenta viene la calma.

wonderful photography.

I love the transition. From gloomy to chirpy.... Reminds the reader that no condition lasts forever and it's all but a phase. Beautiful piece

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