In the blink of an eye
You passed by
Your scent I remembered
Your face I couldn't forget
In the blink of an eye
We crossed paths
We knew each other
We held bodies together
We kissed like forever
In the blink of an eye
I stumbled and fell
You've forgotten and faltered
We fought like demons
We surrendered apart
In the blink of an eye
I am alone
I am tired
I am devoid
and you're gone.
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wow <3 what a great talent hehe ^_^
hehe Thanks. :)
You are not gone.
I read you.
Wish you the best.
Wish you to be with me.
You read me too.
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Nice.
From a distance
Over vast oceans
and a newfound friend
I read you. :)
I like poems they are short and get to the point.
Beatiful poem btw. I can tell this means a lot...i think. "So much can happen, in just a blink of a eye."
You got it right. :)
A beatiful and moving piece. Thank you for sharing
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you like it and it moved you too. :)
Very nice piece. Your passion and emotion really comes through in your words.
Thanks, in poetry you just have to let it through. 😊
A lot can happen in the blink of an eye. :D
True! Time flies so fast.