God's Providence | @prydefoltz

in #poem7 years ago (edited)
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©2018 Paramind

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GOD'S PROVIDENCE
A usual scene in an unusual way,
Caught my attention near a bay.
A prawn jumped out of the water in glee,
A big frog gobble it up in spree
Hardly could the frog digest the fish,
A snake caught it and began to finish,
The poor creature in snake's hook,
In pain and agony began to croak.
The wail of the frog pierced my heart,
So I left, and opened the TV for some flirt.
On the screen I saw a stout deer
Running for its life out of fear,
Suddenly a tiger caught it in its jaws,
And tore it into several pieces .
The scenes put me in awkward thought,
My heart wept for the deer and the frog.
But what about the snake and the tiger ?
Should they not eat and die in hunger ?
I think it's God in heaven that decides
Who will die and who will reside.

Poem written by paramind
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This is a nice piece. I loved the rhymes... well done

Thanks alot brother. Am so glad you like my poem.

Predators and prey, the circle of life - I agree, it's not our place to say who gets to eat. Some great, powerful lines in here, almost like a fable. Nice write friend :)

Thanks. Am glad you really read the poem and understood it.

A thoughtful pieced, paramind. I agree it is the divine that works out how things will be and it is left to us to practice compassion, kindness and appreciation that we may enjoy the works:) Thank you for participating in #fridaypoets.

Thanks for the great idea. Fridaypoets will be so big with time.