Focused on you

in #poem7 years ago

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Have I mentioned,
you have my attention,
with your vibrant style,
that makes me smile.

I am so interested,
and invested,
in this thing,
that's more than a fling.

I can't wait to see,
where it leads.
This wonderful ride,
that's you and me.

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that's a nice poem, is this urs?

Nice. It does capture that initial rush during the first few weeks and months of a new relationship.

This is really nice coming from a lady. Its a good clue👍

The post that is designed with a sincere feeling of posting is very touching @nightgirl

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Love it. Thank you for sharing. Poetry doesn't seem to be as popular as it once was. No idea why I have scores of verses I use all the time from Shakespeare to Kipling. Now I've got this. Thanks again

Lovely poem @nightgirl reminds me of the first moments of a new relationship. Check out my poetry and travel writing @raj808 and follow/upvote if it's your kinda thing :)

What a beautiful picture