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RE: Ten Days of Reflection, day three – The Orchid Opens

in #poem7 years ago

When the sun emits light
Then this flip is flat
If I do not find the path of light
Will there be a sword embedded in a crossbar?
Others worship
Am I turning direction?
If every book has a story
Will there be a data writer myself?
When all history has been dissected
Is there anything that buries me?
Black .. should I be friends with you?
Dark .. should you be my best friend?
When the light comes and dark fades
Feeling weak without being tough

I just adore your so touching poetry my friend @lightsplasher. Thanks for sharing and may it can motivate many people.

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Nice poem and comment, thanks for sharing! It feels to me like poems are hard to write but fun.