Love Poems Youth

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

Love The Young
This relationship as lemon acid sometimes sweet ,, kiss like Cheri ,,
Bitterly but sometimes good ,,
Erkadang like candy ,,
Feels good ,,
And will always ask again ,,

Love ,,
Love like soul ,,
No matter ,,
It will always life forever ,,
And never die ,,

And when you see someone who can make you fly ,, And do not you SIA neglect to say to him ,,
I love you ,,,

Cinta Masa Muda

Hubungan ini seperti asam lemon terkadang manis ,, cium seperti cheri ,, bitterly tapi kadang bagus ,, erkadang seperti permen ,, rasakan bagus ,, dan akan selalu bertanya lagi ,, cinta ,, cinta seperti jiwa ,, tidak masalah ,, itu akan selalu hidup selamanya ,, Dan jangan pernah mati ,, Dan ketika kamu melihat seseorang yang bisa membuatmu terbang ,, Dan bukankah kamu SIA mengabaikannya ,, aku mencintaimu ,,,

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Erkadang? A healthy suggestion, look up formatting! :)

Maybe it is just me but it seems a bit of a mess for me.
Maybe I just have to read again,
Maybe I just haven't seen you,
But i'll be sure to read it once again.