An Outcast POEM

in #poem7 years ago

AN OUTCAST

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In this world where no one could understand

You can never be you, even for a millisecond

In this society, where your existence is irrelevant

You can never say the things you want to rant

Absolutely dead inside yet waking up every morning

Your long non-beating heart had never been burning

You're now merely a shell without a soul

Walking to an artificial light without a goal

Things weren't easy, everything's all grubby

Can't anymore think straight, heads all messy

Would one dare save a person like yourself?

Might as well, forever hide in your shelf.

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Let me know what you guys think. ^^ I'd love to hear your comments. Thank you! :)

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I am moved by this poem. The poem is so lonely. Seems the writer is drowned in self pity.

And here's what I want to say to the writer. Life is very challenging even if you are alone. Set some goals and get out there and face life. You are not an empty shell. You are created for a purpose.

Thank you very much @joselito for appreciating it. And thank you for such kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

upvoted & resteem..

Thank you! :D

it's really a good poem
i wrote one similar to this but yours is better ^^

Thank you for appreciating it @khalifando. ^^ Good day! :)

upvoted and resteem, your post@dontryme2