i enjoy how the words get deep into the roots of the mind from the very first line of this poem. this is good work. i am also a writer and i have a few poems on my blog too. I enjoy dark poetry and the sort of ambiance it creates in the mind. how immediately words transcends into scenery and images appear. really nice
The opening line is one that echoes around my mind quite a bit, this isn't the first poem it has inspired but most certainly the first that leads with it like this. Thank you so much, I am sure you know this is the poetic dream, to paint a thousand pictures with words alone! :)