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RE: Pleasure Is To Feel

in #pleasureistofeel7 years ago (edited)

Amazing! These lines are so well worded. I can definitely see it all; the imagery is amazing. Especially the two lines where the speaker spreads their arms, causing their chest (heart) to rise up towards the moon. Such a vulnerable position, but I can feel the sense of freedom and the moonlight's embrace. Great stuff and I can't wait to read more!