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Are you a photographer and also a model?)) Imho the beautiful girl and her face with expression make a good part of the photograph. But the shot itself is a very good and skillful. The composition is engaging and playing with light is masterful. Yet
I would divide the picture on three part and seek to retouch the upper part with face and sun. Making it more darker by saving this touch of light on her.

Hey
Thank you for the tips. Yeah I am an ameture at photography so the suggestions you gave really means a lot. Thank you :)