I love listening to people making electronic music.. very cool. Im not sure if you are trying to make a loop - or if you are just creating. I would change the virtual instrument you are using for the bass.. It sounds wrong (even though it sounds right).. So I am going to assume that the notes are correct - maybe its something you can fix in the mixdown? The first few bars sound amazing.. its at about the 20 second mark that you need to start playing around :)

Awesome post. Keep me updated!