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Nice entry Ken, this is a really cool song idea. I felt it was a bit repetitive after awhile as you didn't explore other melodies by breaking away from the same pattern, however I did enjoy it, it's catchy and because of the repetition, it's now stuck in my head. I enjoyed the lyrics. Thanks for sharing and entering. Best of luck, Upvoted!

Thanks @verbal-d. I always appreciate your feedback and it's spot on. I appreciate the upvote as well. Take care.

You're very welcome, take care as well, and jam and steem on

Thanks man, I appreciate the support.

you're welcome again :)

Thanks for entering your song Ken (& Jane)!

Thanks to a little bug, using 5 tags in a post right now makes everything but the first one hidden from the tag browsing page. Removing one will fix this. I usually browse #openmic so I wouldn't have found yours if I didn't see the link elsewhere. The first tag isn't changeable but the others are.

Also remember to link this post in the comments of the Open Mic week 11 post: https://steemit.com/openmic/@luzcypher/open-mic-week-11-record-your-performance-on-your-phone-enter-and-win-steem-sponsored-by-pfunk-luzcypher

Thank you for that tip. I'll make the change.

There's still 5 tags now. #week11 could be removed and then the bug would be circumvented

It keeps adding an extra tag, ha ha. So I got it down to four. Thank you again for the tip.