So after many takes of messing up lyrics I finally got one that I could at least bare to post :p
Lyrics are probably the only real problem I encounter while playing live. I usually do well but it takes me a lot of practice to remember them while playing and singing while engaging with a crowd.
Definitely follow me if you enjoy. Will be releasing more and excerpts of my story/music project starting next week.
But this is a favorite for many people when I am playing out and I hope you all enjoy too steemit fam!
"Take Me To Church"
My lover's got humour
She's the giggle at a funeral
Knows everybody's disapproval
I should've worshipped her sooner
If the heavens ever did speak
She's the last true mouthpiece
Every Sunday's getting more bleak
A fresh poison each week
"We were born sick," you heard them say it
My church offers no absolutes
She tells me, "Worship in the bedroom."
The only heaven I'll be sent to
Is when I'm alone with you
I was born sick
But I love it
Command me to be well
Aaay. Amen. Amen. Amen.
[Chorus 2x:]
Take me to church
I'll worship like a dog at the shrine of your lies
I'll tell you my sins and you can sharpen your knife
Offer me that deathless death
Good God, let me give you my life
If I'm a pagan of the good times
My lover's the sunlight
To keep the Goddess on my side
She demands a sacrifice
Drain the whole sea
Get something shiny
Something meaty for the main course
That's a fine-looking high horse
What you got in the stable?
We've a lot of starving faithful
That looks tasty
That looks plenty
This is hungry work
[Chorus 2x:]
Take me to church
I'll worship like a dog at the shrine of your lies
I'll tell you my sins so you can sharpen your knife
Offer me my deathless death
Good God, let me give you my life
No Masters or Kings
When the Ritual begins
There is no sweeter innocence than our gentle sin
In the madness and soil of that sad earthly scene
Only then I am human
Only then I am clean
Ooh oh. Amen. Amen. Amen.
[Chorus 2x:]
Take me to church
I'll worship like a dog at the shrine of your lies
I'll tell you my sins and you can sharpen your knife
Offer me that deathless death
Good God, let me give you my life
Fantastic performance! Great lyrics and amazing voice.
Excellent sound ,what are you using if you don't mind sharing
I use an audio technica 2020 condenser mic and ableton to mix the sound a bit. Not a lot at all.. usually a bit of EQ and other random techniques youtube taught me. :)
Massive respect! Loved this man, perfect performance and such depth in your voice.. You took me to church right there!
Thanks so much!
Great song, the voice and guitar working like a good team, you've really got the funk in the rhythm balanced perfectly to make the most of those lush subte nuances and emotive qualities in your vocals. One of the best I've heard so far. Love it
Congrats on the win @storycharlemagne. You are super blessed wjth talent and skill. I wrote a full review for your entry on my judging list, read the full review here please.
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-67-original-blog
Thank you so much for the support and write up.
I feel sometimes that text does not display enough emotion and longer does not always mean more thought out or better. I really cannot say enough but this means a lot to me and I thank you for taking time out of your day to spread positivity. Thanks again Verbal-d!
You are most welcome bro. I love supporting musicians especially those of your caliber who make big statements, meaningful music and inspiration. My wife is also a big supporter of yours. Please keep it up. You have a follower for sure :)
you are just so good it hurts. its physically hurts! ooh my god... im a songstress this end, every genre i play in and you touch inner cells with that voice. "Take me to church"
Hehe! thank you so much. Appreciate the listen and consideration! So glad steemit enjoyed it.
Oh wow. Your voice is really a powerful one. Good job :)
good song good performance @storycharlemagne i follow u please follow me @exchangetimes
thanks! will do.
You are an amazing musician... I played this 3x.... Love it
really appreciate the compliment & glad you enjoyed :)
Great nice song what do you think about arabic music with rap ?
Id like to hear it but im sure its awesome.
Hahahah right you are sing with only ? Gitar or like drums and piano etc
@storycharlemagne Remarkable color of the voice, nothing brakes on the falsetto section, everything super silky smooth 👍 😎 dig that blues rhythm, definitely one of the best performances I've heard on Steemit
That is a huge compliment and I really appreciate the kind words!
beautiful !!
Niceeeee! You have a great voice!
I love this song, so much power!
Niceeeee! You have a great voice!
I love this song, so much power!
Thank you :)
Really enjoy your performances too! Congrats on open mic win!
Thank you so much :) We should definitely record something together! What do you say?
That would be fun. Count me in!
Great one my friend! I adore the color of your voice, it could tell stories on its own. You are destined to succeed and I wish you all the greatest luck doing it. Now for the more technical stuff: What mic are you using? Keep up the good work and have a fruitful year full of great surprises!
Thank you so much! Appreciate the compliment and blessings for my future! I am using an audio technica 2020 condenser mic. Was a great purchase for the price and for fuller tones.
Yeah, it does sound great. It is an amazing mic for that price. Keep up the great work.
marvelous ..just wonderful :)
:D Thanks !
Awesome cover, man! Really great performance, brother!
Thank you very much. Appreciate the listen!
This is why I joined steemit. Its worth a million dollars with a voice like that. Good luck for the future my man. You deserve a living off your craft. Bless brother
Amazing man.... haunting....
I see no ghosts?!?! haha.
thank you!
great job........ I would never have known you messed up any lyrics if you hadn't said a thing......lol....... Awesome recording
called myself out! haha Thanks.
Awesome Cover! You have great tone to your voice!
Thank you!
That was truly lovely. You've got a fantastic voice and did the song justice. Bravo – thank you for sharing!
woah. great voice dude!!!!👏👏👏
I am FLORED by how amazing your voice is!! I thoroughly enjoyed every second of this video.
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Thank you so much! Replied in the post and upvoted!!!
Great! Lovely delivery.
thank you :)
Yes!
Amen to that :)
Bro, this was amazing!!!, great version!!!
Okay, wow, just heard this on the msp/pal radio. You have talent and are so handsome!
@storycharlemagne who's from your life? we need participants like you in the open mic, believe me you inspire me a lot you are one of the best. it's been a few weeks, believe me.