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I told my psychiatrist that I hear voices in my head.
He told me that I don't have a psychiatrist.

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Whoa – Paul, this is a GREAT composition… I most definitely had voices in my head at 19 as well – both literally and figuratively! Ha!

Though our minds may well be a bit jaded today, I truly believe that all of the beautiful sentiments to which you refer in this piece, shall remain forever ingrained within the purest elements of our hearts. Very NICE, brother! Loved it!!

Thanks man! Yeah, the chorus sentiments can be taken seriously or with a smirk. In general, living by your heart is the way to be. But sometimes you gotta listen to that IQ, and past experience.

I hear ya, bro... It is what it is... but IMO, way deep down - the purity persists... :-)

Like it a lot man!

Thank you so much!

Great composition! You have a lot of heart and emotion when you play too. Thanks for sharing your story with us by playing this song!

Thank you so much @coruscate!

WOW! great composition sir..

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Thank you!

you may check my entry to sir as you like., hehehe

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I like the song! Got me a little dancing in my chair while reading your post and writing this comment; Thanks :)

Thank you! Glad I could help bring some dancing into your day!

Thank you :)

Nice song and chords. I found myself humming a bassline along to it!

Thanks! I'm hoping I can play a good bassline for it when I record it. On the original demo, the amazing piano player also played the bass, and it was a jazzy walking bassline. I've never really played walking bass, so it remains to be seen how well I'll be able to do it for the recording. When this song is put together with all instruments, it's sort of a jazzy pop song.