Oin Originals - Ceiling Fan ( Hive open mic week 101)

in #openmic3 years ago

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Lyrics:
Recognize the place I was before
Reading the mantra on the walls
Looks like, he's tryin
Drifting, thru darkness

Have you wondered about it yet?
Stop staring at the ceiling fan

Momma said the evil man
Cannot take me away from here
Read the years of your life
Ask yourself was I wrong to hate ya?
I was wrong to hate ya

When its always winter, never summer
Read the years of your life
Cuz these dreams, they wont leave you alone
Find the flame in your soul

10 more years can you handle that?
two broken backs and a dad who don't see his kids at all
But the school's got it all figured out

Have you wondered about it yet
Stop staring at the ceiling fan

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hello, as always your voice and your super beautiful songs. I was going to recommend that you open a Disccord, I don't know if you already have one? This way you can promote your posts and have more views, you really are very talented and you transmit a lot when you sing. I'm new to the hive and I'm just learning but don't hesitate to ask me if you have any questions, you could also upload your videos in 3speak it would give you even more views of your wonderful content

Hello, Thank you so much for the tip. I will look into this.

How do I upload to 3speak? and how do I use discord to promote?

go to the 3speak page and there you will see the instructions to register at the beginning an explanatory video appears 🤗🌸, ​​and for disccord download the app and when you have your user created let me know and I'll add you and I'll also help you in everything I can okay? I send you the invitations to the communities and that. There are many wonderful and kind people who will help you as they have helped me.