Break Me Down (Original Song)

in #openmic3 years ago

Thank you for every ounce of love that ya'll contributed on my Halloween post :)
It means so much to me.
Here are the Lyrics to my song! I appreciate any feedback.

Lyrics:

Break me down
all of these demons buildin figures beside my bed
I said break me down
I gotta little bit of pickin apart my head to do
I'm Calling out
unto the soul I know is underneath my bed
call me out every time I hit my head

and if I'm honest
I'm bombin'
all of my things fallin right out of my pocket
and if she's fallin
I'm runnin
Try not to fall into that 'trap' again

And I know she, just wants the best for me
but I can't
Yeah I know she, just wants the best for me
But I can't

So break me down
all of these demons buildin figures beside my bed
I said break me down
I gotta little bit of pickin apart my head to do

and if I'm honest
I'm bombin'
all of my things fallin right out of my pocket
and if she's fallin
I'm runnin
Try not to fall into that 'trap' again

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Awesome song. I'm glad to hear your musical talents as an excellent singer-songwriter. FYI, in the Hive Open Mic community, we ask that people say the words: "Hive Open Mic Week 98" in the beginning of our videos. The reason why is because this lets us know your song is specifically for us. It's a tight-knit community, with a new event each week. Hope you'll jump in and join us again. Peace.

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