🎆Steemit Open Mic Songwriters Challenge #Week 7# - "Kamar" 🎆

in #openmic7 years ago

Hello steemian.
Happy New Year 2018.

I'm created a song about right place right time in this songwriters challenge themed "room". Surely you guys love this song.

Special thanks to @luzchyper for making this challenge, and thanks to @pfunk being loyal to this openmic sponsor.
And thanks also to all teams like @krystle, @ verbal-d, @soundlegion, @ passion-ground and @jessamynorchard who helped this open mic success.

Lyric

My room is different
You do not be surprised
Indeed my room is like this
Full of haunts

At first I slept here
Bristling my hair
I do not know what
This heart starts to pound

My room ...
Full of old stories
Full of memories
Full of hope

Maybe tomorrow me
Must leave you
I still miss you.
Ohh. My room

Thank you for watching

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Beautiful song. Very honest and raw delivery. It’s brave to sing acapella, keep it up!

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