Nice, brother... Can't wait to hear more... Don't sweat not getting the rules down straight away - sounds as though you've got plenty of dry powder to make up for any lost ground.... Nice!
Wow! This is a great song, nicely written, and beautiful vocals. I like the juxtaposition of complex lyrics, imagery, and ever shifting melodies in the verses with the simple, straight ahead style of the choruses. It's like wandering around in a place you're unfamiliar with, and just when you think you're lost, you come back to the same landmark, again and again. Beautiful. I can't wait to hear more. Definitely following you man :)
I can't help you with a name, but great song. Enjoyed it all the way through, good luck on your open mic contest.
Thanks for listening! Much appreciated!
Sounds good and welcome to Steemit and Open Mic.
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apologize for not following I saw other posters but didn't see the rules, now I know for next time appreciate you making me aware.
Nice, brother... Can't wait to hear more... Don't sweat not getting the rules down straight away - sounds as though you've got plenty of dry powder to make up for any lost ground.... Nice!
Some nice vocal moves in there!
Me gusta mucho la voz y la sencillez precisa de la guitarra. Esta es una canción que podría tener en mi teléfono y escuchar frecuentemente
Wow! This is a great song, nicely written, and beautiful vocals. I like the juxtaposition of complex lyrics, imagery, and ever shifting melodies in the verses with the simple, straight ahead style of the choruses. It's like wandering around in a place you're unfamiliar with, and just when you think you're lost, you come back to the same landmark, again and again. Beautiful. I can't wait to hear more. Definitely following you man :)
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WOW. This is utterly amazing. All the feels. Such a shame about a few of the rules being missed for this entry, but next week I'm sure you'll blow a ton of people away. Keep on Steemin' bro!
Write a song for this contest: https://steemit.com/openmic/@luzcypher/open-mic-songwriters-challenge-week-8-till-we-meet-again
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