I felt the POV was clear and worked well. It was a strong narration throughout but if you wanted to experiment it could perhaps feel more immediate with a first person point of view but I don't necessarily think this is needed, maybe just if you want to. I enjoyed it from this perspective :-)
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First POV is common though. I was going for the unique perspective lol. Plus I just thought it might add a bit of humor reading about someone watching someone do something, lol.