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RE: Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!

in #odtasks • 6 years ago

Here's my review on EOS Knights.

https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@pangoli/tgizjsf-game-review-an-introduction-to-eos-knights

~~~ embed:1093423037645578240?s=19 I think I earned a retweet from SOTD. will be expecting a review. Thanks. twitter metadata:d2l6enlibGFzdDExfHxodHRwczovL3R3aXR0ZXIuY29tL3dpenp5Ymxhc3QxMS9zdGF0dXMvMTA5MzQyMzAzNzY0NTU3ODI0MHw= ~~~

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     6 years ago  

    Thanks for your review. It is a pleasure to read, visually well formatted and even your tweet is an eye catcher.

    After thinking hard, I only found two things to improve:

    • There are still a couple typos that get distracting, for example frequent use of lowercase “i”. In English, the nominative form of the singular first-person pronoun, "I", is normally capitalized, along with all its contractions (I'll, I'm, etc.).
    • I would like to see more review feedback & critique interwoven with the game play description, as well as some personal flavour. Which character did you pick? Are they well balanced? Is the marketplace intuitive and fairly priced? Are the pets any fun, what is the name of your pet and does it listen when you call it?

    Overall, I think you did an excellent job with your review.
    Meta review score: 👑👑👑👑👑

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       6 years ago  

      I've never had a better review! I know what to do next! Thank you.

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         6 years ago  

        I've never had a
        Better review! I know what
        To do next! Thank you.

                         - pangoli

        I'm a bot. I detect haiku.

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