Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

• Nice story, it reads well and has a good introduction, body and conclusion.
• In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. You mentioned some of this in your conclusion, but I’d like to read more of your personal feedback!
• Good choice of screenshots, they really support the story.
• Title can be improved, it is a bold claim for an app to be the first, I would be critical in copying that. Tags and category are good.
• Tweet is okay, a bit too many tags for my taste.
• State of the DApps mention is subtile and fits right into the story.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🐲🐲🐲🐲