Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
- Good story telling, it reads very easily.
- In a game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. You mentioned some of this in your conclusion, but I’d like to read more of your personal feedback!
- Images are well chosen with a good mix of flavour pictures and in-game screenshots.
- Nice title, category and tags. Not sure why you added
indonesiathough, as it has nothing to do with the game. - Your Tweet is not directly related to the review.
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
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Thanks for the feedback
I use Indonesia tags because i'm an Indonesian and i'm sure that Indonesian people will read it, a lot of gamers from Indonesia.
For the twitter I thought it refer to the game and I was promoting for the people to search the game using StateOfTheDApps.com
And no there is no big deal. Right?
No bid deal, just a remark 😊
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Btw, thanks to putting a comment, it means that my review is worthy for everyone.
So, next time I will write better than before.