Not bad. I was a little surprised at how quickly Klara jumped into bed (isn't she from a convent?), but there may be something in her backstory that makes her a little hungrier for affection than I realized.
Worth an upvote in any case, and I hope to read more.
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Thank you so much.
Yes, Klara was from a convent, but it's not like Earth-based convents where they have vows of chastity or anything. They are simply servants of their goddess (Vasana) and often come from disadvantaged situations. In chapter 30, we saw a little about her backstory - she'd met the captain previously and had been very much attracted to him then. (I think I put a hint about it elsewhere too, but not super developed in this story.) I probably could have strung it out a bit longer, but this felt like the right place to end it - with Klara's heart safely bestowed and hope for the future.
I appreciate your comment, thanks for stopping by! The character & other info post for the next story will be posted tomorrow, with Freyja's Fire beginning the day after that. It moves at a more human-like pace - though we are still working with people who have heightened empathic senses.