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The cover drew me in, the song was kickass....groovy beat...and definitely was sucked in with a mind trip.

Your intro didn't do it for me {Lucky for you I scrolled down}....cause you end was epic !! ..and very witty......um...I'd suggest deleting the top....

Thank you for your advice! This has been edited. Awesome when people actually take time to help out! You have been up-voted!

You're more than welcome Steemit friend :)

So good. I can easily hear this in a suspense/drama movie.

Thank you. One day : )

Buen tema musical para ser sencillo gracias.

Mucho Gracias :)

Gracias a ti, por publicar algo excelente, porque me gusta mucho la música.

wow...me likey!

Thanks for the kind words : )

Nice song! I agree with @kittykarma1111, the cover is pretty nice! I really like the moody intro. I would make the bass a little louder at 1:16 to make it sound fuller.

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That's awesome! I'll definitely reach out to you in the future :) BTW, are you on Steemit chat?

no have not tried the chat yet

Thanks man, I will definitely take your advice there. Do you think it needs more gain overall?

Maybe a db or 2, but when you make your bass louder that will add gain. A secret I learned a while ago was to make everything as loud as you could before any clipping occurred, then putting it through a limiter until it was the volume you wanted. How much limiting is going on?

I'm running it through maximizer (with a limiter built-in) with slight compression. I actually just found that I had cut the low a bit to much on grand piano...doing fresh export with more gain. Fingers crossed. Thanks for your help!

Absolutely! I'll check it out

Does the new version sound better to you?

That is solid. The kick is sitting in the mix better too

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