@riverflows: I hope this is understandable and helpful. I'll keep going as I can. I really love Natural Medicine, even though I don't post.
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em dash instead of hyphen, of natural medicine – from herbalism...
Confused wording. Suggested change: from herbalism, essential oils and food as medicine, to meditation and spirituality, as well as...
add hyphen and correct spelling of 'centered', earth-centered
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nonrestrictive clause, add comma after 'supported', supported, from ayurveda...
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sometimes external link icon, sometimes not, is there a way to make it consistent?
Lotus for Yogis, lowercase 'f' as in other titles, all caps 'LOTUS' in each title
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similar correct spelling
Steem blockchain STEEM all caps only in reference to the token
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email us at at welcome... delete second use of 'at'
em dash instead of hyphen, account processing – we're very much...
receive correct spelling
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hyphenate non-natural-medicine-related, use en dash between 'non' and 'natural'
parenthesis, delete 'or', and 'dapps' (decentralised apps)
wrong link for Steempeak
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change contraction 'it's' to possessive pronoun 'its' 2x
and the its link delete 'the'
Steem platform change to lowercase except first letter
@riverflows proofing cont.
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external link icons appear inconsistently
suggestion for all: use em dash instead of hyphen, capitalize only the first word after em dash, or use headline style caps for words after em dash
Buying … A How-To add hyphen to 'how-to', noun form
Delegation... close space between 'it' and comma following
LOTUS... italicize 'Coming'
Naturalmedicine.io... use 'v' instead of 'vs' for versus, consistent with LOTUS V STEEM V FIAT
Thought: Some of the topics listed here are not the main topic or first topic in the posts that they link to. Would be best to have a blog post devoted solely to each topic listed. Or is there a way to direct the link to the section of the post that deals with that topic?
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Earn... insert space between 'For' and 'Writing', lowercase 'f' in 'for'
What Is Curation? capitalize 'i' in 'is'
STEEM, Steem Power, Steem Dollars... correct first three words as shown, usage from Steemit.com FAQs, replace hyphen with em dash
Everything You... capitalize 'you'
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