Hi! Thanks for the input. I appreciate your opinion. What I'm going for here is a contrast between the lyric and the style - the lyric is painful and even sad - but the singer is not sad. It's a bad break up, but it's not a bad thing. It hurts, but she's happy - because he wasn't good to her.

So, I'm really not going for super emotional here. It's also for the teen market so there needs to be a playfulness to it.

With that in mind, does your opinion change at all? If not, do you think maybe the lyrics might be too "grown-up" for this style and market? Thanks again!